Impatient with the limitation on his speed that having to stay with the infantry and baggage train had imposed on him, Cyrus had boldly pushed ahead. Thus he was the first to arrive at the city gates of Sardis at the head of his cavalry; even before the rest of the army. Cyrus left the column at a distance he deemed safe from any archers on the city walls who may be tempted to take pot-shots at them, then, holding aloft a lance, to which he had attached a piece of white cloth to serve as a flag of truce in his right hand and a wickerwork shield in his left, he cautiously approached the city gates. With his wickerwork shield held in front of him and keeping and extremely sharp eye out for possible missile fire, Cyrus hailed the guards that he knew would be on duty in the gate-house to man the now heavily-barred gates, which had been closed the instant the dust from Cyrus’ expedition had been seen rising in huge brown clouds above the horizon.
Soon a Lydian guard appeared on the wall above the gate; although he was armed from head to toe, his hands were empty as he waited for Cyrus to state his purpose. In tones which would undoubtedly be clearly heard well inside the city walls Cyrus declaimed: “Ho there! Inside the city! Tell your master, Croesus, son of Alyattes, that Cyrus, son of Cambyses, King of Persia and Media, has come to finish what Croesus started! If he does not wish to come out to fight, let him skulk inside his city, and hide behind its walls like a coward, we will then lay siege to the city and deprive you of all the goods that you normally receive through these gates; until you either surrender or starve!”
As the guard disappeared once more from the top of the wall to give his message to Croesus, Cyrus returned to the column where Harpagus awaited his instructions. “Let us fall back far enough to allow him time to come out of the city and draw up his battle-lines.” Cyrus said; then he added, “These Lydians are brave men; in all Asia there are none braver; they will not surrender without a fight!”
Appreciating the appropriateness and the candour of his king’s personal assessment of the enemy, Harpagus saluted him, striking his gauntleted right fist across his mailed leather cuirass. “Yes Lord!” he responded firmly, as he turned and, giving a brief hand-signal, wheeled his column about and withdrew far enough to allow Croesus to draw up his lines of battle without any fear of interference. While the Lydians were occupied with this, the Persian infantry section began to appear on the horizon; followed closely by the baggage train.
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Croesus had assembled his generals to discuss how they might best approach this new situation with which they were confronted. As soon as he entered the war-room, Sandanis spoke, “Sire, I’ve sounded the assembly; all the mercenaries who live in or near the city have been recalled; they await your command.”
Croesus nodded his approval of Sandanis’ actions; smiling at the other generals he said confidently, “He is very bold this Cyrus! But we Lydians still have the best cavalry in all Asia! What forces does Cyrus have with him?”
“Mostly infantrymen,” Sandanis responded, “with only a small detachment of cavalry… he is too rash Lord; it seems he has attacked us impetuously; although we have very few infantry without the support of our allies, yet our cavalry are easily a match for him now!”
“Very well,” Croesus said thoughtfully, “…the enemy have courteously withdrawn to allow us to draw up our battle-lines; we shall oblige this young man and teach him not to be so impetuous! As for battle-lines, we shall put our cavalry in front with our infantry behind them; the shock of a cavalry charge from my lancers will break up their formation and make the infantry’s job much easier; the Persians won’t know what’s hit them.”
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Harpagus had watched Croesus form his battle ranks and had immediately observed the strength of Croesus’ cavalry; which consisted mainly of heavy lancers; and which formed his front rank. Obviously, he thought, Croesus intends to use them as shock troops to charge our front line, hoping to scatter it and thus break through to the rear of our ranks; where he realized grimly, they would easily be able to do incalculable damage. Although he was reluctant to admit it, Croesus’ battle-lines worried him; he knew that in the face of such a charge, even the most experienced spearmen could break ranks and flee. Harpagus knew all too well that if this happened the battle could easily turn into a complete rout and all would be lost.
The general trotted up to Cyrus just as he was giving his final instructions to his officers, “My lord,” he said gravely, as his king finished speaking, “the enemies’ strength lies in their cavalry; our infantry-men cannot match them; neither can our cavalry, which number less than half of theirs. But I know how we can make their cavalry useless to them…”
“Indeed Harpagus?” the King enquired eagerly. Cyrus had agreed grimly with his general’s assessment of the enemy’s plans; convinced by what he had seen himself of how they were beginning to line up in their battle formation; he too had been worried by the strength of the Lydians’ heavy cavalry, “What do you think we should do?” he asked frankly.
Harpagus replied with surprising confidence, a grim smile, and a twinkle in his eye: “Have half the cavalry dismount; unpack the camels from the baggage train and then have the cavalrymen mount these as their steeds; we will put them in front, with our infantry close behind, with the rest of our cavalry protecting their flanks and to hunt down enemy deserters; horses have a natural dread of camels; they cannot stand the sight or the smell of them. Thus the enemy cavalry will be uncontrollable and spread confusion among the enemies’ ranks, leaving their cavalrymen easy targets for the spears of our infantry and the rest of our cavalry.”
“Very well; do it! Quickly!” Cyrus ordered, immediately and intuitively recognizing a sound plan. A few minutes later, as Harpagus had suggested, Cyrus and half of his cavalry had mounted their new steeds. Fortunately Cyrus’ cavalrymen were just as familiar with these beasts of burden as they were with their own horses; so they had no trouble adapting to their new mounts as they now quickly rode up to take their place in Cyrus’ front line. When this was done, Cyrus turned once more to give his final instructions to Harpagus, “Show them no mercy; but make sure that Croesus is taken alive even if he resists when he is captured!”
“Yes Lord;” Harpagus said obediently, then, nodding his head in the direction of the enemy’s ranks, he said, “It seems the enemy is almost ready…” “Then sound the charge before they have a chance to seize the initiative!” He ordered. Harpagus saluted as he instantly replied, “At once Sire!” Then turning to his trumpeter to relay his King’s command, he said firmly, “Trumpeter, sound the advance!”
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Hi Asty,
I think Emmjay already beat me to it and his advice is, as always, ‘sage’.
I contributed a piece on the Unleashed in April or May 2008 and to my surprise was accepted. On the top right hand corner of The Drum is button for ‘contributions’. I think Maddie and perhaps Gregor Stronach put in a good word, or at least encouraged me back then.
The setting up for payment is done through their office of the ABC, GPO Box 9994
The pay is little but it feels sweet and sometimes we get to eat fresh sardines, deeply fried with a slice of lemon.
This Unleashed adventure was then was followed by a 70 000 word rant on birth, after-births and family journey which I would like to self publish. I can see, this needs a solid edit still, but the bones are there.
So, they are still asking for contributors and I will nominate you Asty, if you like. Give me your details, name etc.
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Gerard, it’s very kind of you to offer to nominate me, and I’d be happy and grateful for you to do so, providing, of course, that the fact that someone is nominating someone OTHER than themselves doesn’t make their moderators blow a fuse or a gasket!
Then all I’ll need is to think of a nicely controversial topic for an article! Maybe an article about the new ‘global’ and unitarian trend in religions and what this means in terms of a growing modern ‘global consciousness’? Eg. the Baha’i and Kao Tai-ism…
Can I email you my details, Gez? This wonderful virtual pub is just a little too public for me to want to publish them all here… presumably you also need physical and email addresses and my home phone number?
I’ll email them to you a bit later on… I’m probably goinig out to have a bit of a jam with one of my new Baha’i friends this evening. I’m just ‘doing my blogs’ before getting ready to go out…
🙂
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Asty,
Of course some people get nominated and if you e-mail me with your details it is up to you to follow up with an article. I can e-mail you back with the Unleashed people who are dealing with the contributed articles.
Enjoy the jam with your friends
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Was only joking about the mods blowing a fuse, Gez… Geez, a joke’s not funny when you have to explain that it was a joke!
Anyway, I will email you my details soon, but do you think it might be wise for me to write something BEFORE you actually put in the nomination? My new Baha’i friends have given me an idea for an article about religion… most specifically about the progressive evolution of religion, the Baha’i concept of ‘progressive revelation’, its relevance to global warming and other global problems and the appropriateness of such global and inclusive religions at this point in history… but it may take a week or two to research and write.
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asty, if you go here: http://www.abc.net.au/thedrum/contribute/
You’ll see this:
Unleashed
If you would like to become a contributor to Unleashed, please email your submission for consideration, along with a brief biography, to Unleashed@abc.net.au. If you would like to suggest an Unleashed contributor please email their name, area of expertise and contact information if possible, to the same address. We regret that not all submissions or suggested contributors will be published.
No need to nominate anyone, it seems; just send them your “submission” and cross your fingers.
Good luck.
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Thanks atomou… perhaps it would be better for me to do it that way because then I can take my time and (hopefully) write something appropriate.
Recently, as I’ve mentioned, I have met some Baha’is and they are mostly Persian (Iranian) and from what they tell me, which has been reinforced by my own researches, I think I owe Warrigal an apology for rejecting his correction of my use of the Ea/Enlil/Merodach trinity of gods for the religion of Medes and Persians at the time of Astyages/Cyrus…
Warrigal was indeed correct, the religion of the Medes and Persians at this time would have been Zoroastrianism. I think the Ea/Enlil/Merodach trinity would have been part of the Babylonian (ie. Assyrian) pantheon.
I also apologize to all my readers for this error; it will be amended by the time I publish ‘Cyrus’ in ‘hardcopy’…
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Gee, They were on something then.
How cunning to charge the calvary with camels. Horses and alpacas are nothing like that though, they get on very well.
Mind you, a berserk male alpaca can create chaos anywhere.
If I told Croeses once , I told him twice; avoid the male berserk syndrome!
By the way, has Chesty Bond now taken on the modding?
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Not so much Chesty Bond – as Super Santa
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Asty, one of the extra good bits about modding is that I get to go fishing for pictures. I found this guy
http://members.ozemail.com.au/~ancientpersia/author.html
Do you want to invite him over to the Pig’s ?
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Well, I followed the link and I must say that he certainly seems like an interesting dude.
Yes, Emmjay, I’d certainly like to invite him to the Pig’s. But I think you should give the invitation.
I think the only person who actually may have come to the Pig’s in response to an invitation from me is Algernon… which reminds me, Merv, can I have a round of Trotters’ please… Oh, and a long pink one for Helvi.
Algae, I seem to remember I promised you a pint of Trotters; never let it be said I don’t keep my promises! (I DID invite you, didn’t I?) .
Anyway, here’s health to you all, Helvi, Algae, Emmjay, slange-vahrr!
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Roger. Wildo.
Cheers,
Emm
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The story is well told, asty, but like most women, I’m more into peace than wars 🙂
All the same , I’m learning ancient history; I also learnt that the horses fear camels, never knew that!
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Helvi, unlike most men, I’m also more into peace than war; and yet, if one wants peace one must be prepared for war… and that means that it is good practice to learn as much as possible about strategy and tactics; and as Emmjay said a little while ago, “I love a good strategy well played out”…
I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story; I’m trying to edit the book one last time before December 18th so I can qualify for a 10% reduction in printing costs for the first batch, which, if I manage to meet the deadline, should be printed by mid-February. I’ll let you know as soon as I have them printed up and yours will be the very first copy sold… (Not sure about the price yet as that depends on how much it costs to print ’em!)
Anyway… as I said to Emmjay, the battle is only just beginning…
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Asty, You seem to be heading for self publishing your book. I am curious how you have travelled so far.
I have had nothing but luke warm responses from agents and publishers, wishing me well etc. but not as much as a zac on anything more definite.
Still, I enjoy the writing but would like others to read something of that, even for niks.
The UL pays for our pea soup with rookworst, that’s all; but me no complain..
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Gez, can you please Email me again with the ” Unleashed – How to get paid” instructions?
I had a discussion with Susan recently about how difficult it is to even get a reply from Unleashed – much less anything indicative about whether they will use the article – and even more remotely – WHEN. Two Emails about the Rudd Menzies piece for a reply that they might use it… sometime…. or let us know if you can’t wait – for an indeterminate time.
I’m afraid that Drum will focus their attention on the ABC staffers and the rest of us can get into an increasingly long conga line….
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Emmjay, I’d like to know how to go about submitting an article to the Drum… just in case I ever feel tempted to do so… and of course, if Gez would also email me the ‘how to get paid’ instructions you have just requested yourself, that would also be most welcome.
Indeed, any advice you can give either of us on how to be published in a more traditional manner, would, I’m sure, be very useful also, although it seems like we’re all in pretty much the same boat.
😉
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Hi T2. I don’t know much about the new Drum / Unleashed, but the old one – getting published was to respond at the bottom of the authors list to “Nominate a contributor”. Nobody’s going to nominate anyone except themselves.
You are supposed to provide an outline of your wanted contribution for their munificent approval.
In the old days, I sent a) the nomination, b) the picture and the bio – which they butchered and only fixed later on when they had published a half a dozen or so popular pieces. Even so, my original self-deception said that I was a freelance lance, but they said they thought readers would think it was a typo instead of a joke 🙂 and … c) not the summary of my idea, but the actual 1,000 words.
Back then Stephen Rapley was modding – and we hit it off – he used to send funny replies and comments about the pieces and the rest – as they say is history.
These days they stick more to the “pitch me the idea before you send the piece” – which I cannot fathom since the pieces are so short anyway. Probalably saves them a few moments in a sea of incoming stuff.
Tip : be topical and controversial so the loonies come out of the trees and fill your blog with comments. Sometimes I take a completely contrarian view – eg the Kokoda piece.
Good luck !
PS – I know less than fuck all about paper publishing.
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Thanks for the info Emmjay… I’m sure it will prove to be very useful, especially since Gerard has offered to nominate me as a potential contributor… It should be interesting to see what happens…
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Yes, Gerard, I am intending to self-publish ‘Cyrus’.
The trouble with ‘traditional’ publishers is that nowadays they only ever publish established authors; beginners like thee and me don’t get a look-in… they just don’t want to risk spending money on ‘unknowns’.
So self-publishing seems to be the only practical way to go… I have already self-published one book, my ‘Aesthetics of Violence’ and Emmjay can speak for the quality of the product.
I don’t know about ‘print-on-demand’ publishers in your area, but these guys are what makes self-publishing a practical option as two or three hundred dollars can get your first few copies printed and after that you can order them in small batches or even single copies.
In Adelaide there are more than one ‘print on demand’ publishers, but the one I’m using is ‘Digital Print Australia’ in Currie Street (number 116, if memory serves). They also have a website which you can find by googling their name, I suppose. It might well be worth your while to talk to them, Gez, if you want to publish yourself… they do free delivery within Australia, I think…
The problem is that it is very hard to be writer, publisher AND sales manager, especially without all the marketing apparatus needed to advertize and sell one’s product, and the established bookshops won’t have a bar of self-publishers. If I had to make a living at writing, I’d starve to death, I suppose; as it is, it has become something of a ‘paying hobby’ which just gives me a few extra bucks every now and then… pea soup and rookwurst are about all it would pay for, I think.
However, I manage to sell a copy of AOV every now and then (if you’d like to purchase a copy, I’d be only too happy to post one to you!), but I’m hoping that ‘Cyrus’ will have a bit more commercial potential.
Anyway, the best of luck with your own self-publishing endeavours, should you choose to try it!
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A beautiful piece of military strategy on the hoof, T2. Beautifully told.
Looks like the odds for Cyrus are shortening alarmingly.
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The battle has just begun, Emmjay… and I must confess to a little authorial pride about how I’ve told this story. Hope everyone else enjoys it too…
😉
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