Story and Illustration by ‘Shoe
Dog most nights slept in the front room with Isobella facing an open doorway onto a verandah and beside the internal doorway that had no door against the Castle’s central room even though Dog was not Isobella’s, Isobella in trust asleep on a divan, Dog slung low on the giant sandstone blocks that made the floor interesting. Between the blocks had not been filled with grouting and sometimes one of Dog’s paws dropped into a chasm in her sleep. Dog re-accommodated herself with a deft twist of her leg.
Dog sidled in like a comma into Isobella’s room in the evening. She had a way as if worried what would happen to her tail if she stopped watching it. She was a break in a sentence, but the opening announcement of a trial by jury, fearful and hopeful. She was a squat dog and showed her hard life by her habits, devoted and pessimistic, intelligent and naive.
The owl native to New Zealand, Ruru, the Morepork, Ninox novaeseelandiae, a Bobuk was out all night long almost entirely silent. Ruru has special feathers.
Etia anō āku mata me te mata-ā-ruru e tīwai ana
Me te mata kāhu e paro noa rā kai te tahora!
My eyes are like morepork eyes turning from side to side,
Like the eyes of a hawk who soars over the plain! 1
Margaret Orbell, Birds of Aotearoa. Auckland: Reed, 2003, p101.
REF:
1 http://www.teara.govt.nz/en/birds-of-prey/page-2
PAST EPISODES, READERS
Episode 1 – November 2010 – is here https://pigsarms.com.au/2010/11/22/the-castle-episode-one-the-florist/
Episode 2 – April 2011 – is here https://pigsarms.com.au/2011/04/02/the-castle-episode-2-wooden-%E2%80%93-it-%E2%80%93-be-%E2%80%93-nice-%E2%80%93-to-%E2%80%93-get-%E2%80%93-on-%E2%80%93-with-%E2%80%93-your-%E2%80%93-neighbours/
Episode 3 – February 2012 – is here https://pigsarms.com.au/2012/02/16/the-castle-episode-3-fruhlingsrauschen/
Episode 4 – October 201 2 is here https://pigsarms.com.au/2012/10/29/the-castle-episode-4-lessons/

I love that line “Dog sidled in like a comma”. I’m fascinated by Whippets. I think they float in like a rhetorical question mark. Lovely work, ‘Shoe. Thank you.
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I liked that. I spent a little time chewing through a follow on I edited several times to give it substance for chewing over and came out pleased. Pleased am I too getting through the pain barrier and forgetting about lost chapters (that went with the failed drives). I feel the excitement. Thank you for looking at it and posting it.
Whippets like rhetorical question marks? That is too good. I would like to see where that could go. 🙂
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They are noiseless in their flight. This is why the bird is a good hunter. I like the drawing of the owl looking a bit worn out indeed.
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Thank you Gez. O, yes, I myself think the owl looks done in, eh. All that night life. 🙂
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A morepork however not a silent bird insofar as reference is it’s distinctive call…
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‘Shoe, don’t you mean ‘mopoke’? Morepork is the place written about by Terry Pratchett! (or is there some symbolic irony here that I’m missing?)
Good story and piccie but!
🙂
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They are a vlovely bird, asty. My nocturnal habits and wandering around Auckland exploring meant I was fortunate to fleetingly see it.
Nope, there is is no symbolic meaning you are missing there. 🙂
I searched you out a Terry Pratchett type-I think morepork.

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LOL! I like ‘morepork’ anyway! But I STILL think the bird is a mopoke!
Must say nocturnal explorations of Auckland sound like fun!
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Crikey! It does say ‘morepork’ at the end of the movie… but how well-edjummakated was the poster? Could be the local name for ‘Mopoke’ (which may, I suppose be an American version of a similar species of owl…) And besides, they’re only Kiwis anyway… so what would THEY know?! (Just kidding ‘Shoe… no… put that cricket bat down, ‘Shoe… ‘Shoe! PUT…. THE BAT…. DOWN…!!!)
😉
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asty, you hapless chap you are confusing Ruru with Mopoke or Morepork but you frequently forget I was born and raised in tropical North Queensland and I was an emigre to Aotearoa for ten years only. I have proof I am not a kiwi that I flew there and back, not the little bird leastwise because they cannot fly.
They are very cute, the little birds, if you have not seen one. I thought when I saw them there had been a mistake and they had wandered into their own cartoon. They are v cartoonable.
Crrrrrrrick-et bat, maybe you mean the little cricket crossed with one of those remarkable wing folded characters that hang around, now they are remarkable. How I have lived to tell the tale of walking through bat colonies in NQ I cannot imagine. Lucky I guess.
asty, recall the fellow who was the cricketer sportsman who raised his cricket bat and waved it at some cheeky reveller in a stand at a game? In a threatening way. Wow, that blew me away, truly, that was amazing to see that replay. When I was a kid and as you may recall played competitive tennis if we used a tennis racquet as a weapon of actual practice against anybody or raised it as an implied threat, we were sent to Coventry and I recall that every time I see this reference to me purportedly dashing around with a cricket bat. 🙂
Perish the thought. Funny I have never played cricket either but my mum did, how cool is that. I only know what end a cricket bat is from the next because I have Sri Lankan friends who are into their cricket and I occasionally wander into a game of theirs. Me bad and I have never been to a cricket game. How I wish for the experience. Be careful what I wish for I tell myself. I wished to go the races because I had never been and it was like watching horses learn to paint it was so slow between overs. 🙂
Well, that was fun.
🙂
‘Shoe
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