By Sandshoe
Corner walked down the hill to The Castle. Black was outside on the cement driveway entrance with the Balloonettes in the sun. Corner wanted something. Black was himself wondering what he should do about the day. He looked straight up at the sun.
“Oink,” Corner announced. Hardly customary. “Oink,” rejoindered Black and added an oink. “Oink!” To be fair. To be fair Corner needed to be given a lot of field. He wouldn’t get it if Black was suddenly off the jokes. Like a lot of night club operators and day-time saloon frequenters, Black was good for the jokes.
Corner was an isolate.
“Seen the other boys much?” This was Corner at his best. Corner was a drama queen short of a John Paul Young. Mind you he had one in the old vinyl record hold-all at his mother’s place. Love is in the Air. “Mind if we go in?” he enquired looking meaningfully at Black. They went to school together.
“Naah,” stretched Black and uncurled from where he had dropped into a half-squat/half-crouch position with his arms resting lightly over his blue denim knees.
“Those jeans aren’t tight,” laughed Corner. Black growled and laughed an easy laugh. “You never change, Corner,” he said, stretched, scratched and yawned. “They’re spray-on these days. Left me short a week’s.” He followed Corner through the entrance to the house. The bare wooden boards without any treatment and no finish on their surface to make a conventional floor looked like a consignment of recycled and untreated timber. Freshly delivered and stacked dusty. The sound they gave off when walked over was a strangely comforting subdued tread. Evidence the plain room, empty other than for a couch, had begun with considered design. Love. Money. “Get on with it. You here because you’re a space or here because you want something to do. You can get these girls who live here some help. Dunno what you blokes do.” Black, lean and tense could look pretty well annoyed when he was useful and he flushed angry. It was all a game.
Corner saw the keg and acknowledged it by walking over to it and giving it a slap. ‘Nice to see you fellers are into the good stuff, eh?” Here was ritual. “Do y’want a taste,” scowled Black. “I’ll get you a glass. Spose y’re gonna tell me y’re on the day.”
“I’m on.”
A women’s voice, tired, slurred and floated in a whine from somewhere above them. “You black egg, don’ give arse sucker any of piss.”
Black ignored the directive. “C’mon,” and he got a glass off the bench that was covered in a towel and on it a batch of clean glasses from various hotels. “You don’t want one of these?”
He poured the glass full to its top and, extending his tongue out of his opened mouth, licked the rim in a seductive circle like a lover offering the first challenge of a new partner, never taking his eyes off Corner.
“Pffftt, not me, is the woman here?”
“Who and why? Dammit, don’t… .” Black was looking as if he would reach out and take hold of Porker like a wriggling piglet and carry him outside around the belly. Black never looked threatening to anybody other than his enemies.
Corner responded quickly and stepped backwards towards the door he had entered the premises through. “The women with the Australian accent.”
Black was on the tips of his toes and moving almost like a cat when a cat scampers sideways in war play. His legs were stiffened in a manner he adopted to sustain his athletic balance and momentum in a challenge directly aimed at the man who had become, again, his adversary. “Why!” he demanded, starting, his face suffused with the characteristic black of the experience of his rage. “You don’t want to make any mistakes, Simon.”
Corner had exited the door and was on his way off the property. He was no equal to Black. He hesitated, eyeing the ‘Balloonettes’. The young women giggled. One was braiding another’s hair. The third painted their client’s fingernails on a hand extended at flat rest on a river rock. Where the women had moved to sit cross-legged by it on the ground. They had been able from there to witness something of what happened in the house when Porker and Black had gone inside.
“Come back here,” demanded Black. He was taking off his silver skull ring and sliding it with one hand flatted into the fob pocket of his jeans. Corner whirled. “Keep your hair on, Black” he managed to hiss in time as his opponent drew close enough to hit him, “She telephoned the Station she left that black leather coat in a phone booth.” Black pulled up sharp. He rested back at ease on the heels of his sneakers, “Whaa, man? O, you’re a sleaze. Phone booth. Why didn’t you say so. She’ll be looking for that. Gee, that was stupid. Here. Give me your details so I can get her to ring you. Geez, you should say.”
“Don’t worry, Black, it was you I came to see. She knows where we are. You know she knows where we all are.” He smirked, cocky again. “That’s all, but tell her I came to see her.”
Black didn’t say anything. He was surrounded by the women and fussed to join them by the rock so he could braid the hairdresser’s hair. Corner swung the height of the drive. He had a distinctive lope.
“What would you be?” Siratha, the talented beauty artist now having her hair braided asked Black. She had sat as pretty as a picture on the rock and was still. “What would you be if you had not been… what you are?”
“When I went to Sydney I was running that brothel in a week, it was when I first realised what I wanted to really be. It doesn’t matter now. Give me the band. Here. Have mine. I never got around to it. Business. I was only 16. It doesn’t matter.”
Siratha stood and faced Black where the sun was a rivulet of sheening over the face of the bodice of her gown. Tiny metallic trinkets sewn by her into the fabric played at the sun. She lifted the hem of her skirt and extended it in a drape as a dancer would to make a curtsey. She bobbed. Straightened. “Say what would someone be if… they weren’t a bank robber,” she giggled in a rush of infectious laugh and stood closer in response to being waved by Black to him so he could tidy a strand of hair. “I will tell you as long as you don’t laugh,” he said, grave. He stepped back.
“I won’t laugh,” she giggled, and he frowned so she stopped.
“A florist. I would have liked to have been a florist. That seems to me to be a perfect, lovely way to make a living.” The pealing laughter of the three women as they scampered and rolled on the excavation dirt to collect it in their hair and rough house each other as they rolled caught an eventual echo that was returned them by their play. They lay entwined sharing the liberation of their philosophy and the warmth of the earth on their skin and in the dirt in their hair. Black had left to go to the shop.
Sandshoe
10/11/10

Bookmarked. Hope to return soon.
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You’ll need to visit the latest edition, Voice. This has been republished and is now titled: The Castle: Episode 1 – The Florist.
I look forward to your comment on it if you are so moved to do so when the time comes you read it. 😉
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I like your style shoe, I think I am getting better at your look on the universe
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Ta, Hung.
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I’ve put off making a comment, until now. Your writing style reminds me of some of the great pulp writers. Quickly places the reader into another place, quite foreign to one’s usual experience.
I agree with Hung, the ‘shoeniverse is a unique place,which takes a bit of getting used to, but is quite likable, all the same.
Look forward to the sequel.
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Well, I finally discovered that my lack of an internet connection was due to server ‘outages’… which finally became ‘inages’ again… so I finally got to read your story Shoe. I enjoyed it, though I still can’t claim to have ‘understood’ it; but reading your stories is a bit like taking LSD…
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asty… something I have never taken in fact. That is a great compliment. I think. 🙂
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Well, LSD can be very interesting Shoe, the hallucinations can be quite enlightening as they reveal one’s deepest subconscious imaginings… but they are not always easy to understand straight away; sometimes their meanings only become clear after the passage of years; and of course, sometimes a trip is just a trip… Though I must also say that I haven’t had any in more years than I care to remember.
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In our lives, asty, 🙂 people will experience psychedelic migraines, psychoses, forget to eat, read books, watch documentaries, etcetera… yourself will realise the path to hallucinatory experience is as old as… well, old anyway… I thought I would say.
Thank you for your kind interest in my story.
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Hi Shoe,
Like your last offering, I read it a couple of times to get to the essence of your story. It sure has a way of getting one in and certainly needs an uncluttered involvement of the reader. The many descriptions at times forced me to a much more serious attempt to grapple with the story. I like your unconventional way of expressing things, such as when you wrote; “pretty as a picture on the rock and was still.”
Thanks Shoe.
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Again, Gez, amazing that I put in that image to lift the piece at that point, it was a late entry… pretty as a picture on the rock and was still. That is contrived to be unusual and eye catching, and she is I think too! Thank you so much. That is so encouraging.
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There’s my boarding call. 🙂
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I was at the Internet kiosk at the Tiger lounge-Melbourne airport-waiting to catch the plane when I wrote ‘boarding call’.
I had been intending to offer the piglets the ‘amusing’ view of my turning to this story to read the comments and reply, when I realised my graphic attached to this story is so enormously giant in colour and style it would glow like a beacon from the screen and “””communicate””” across the space behind me where there, an early queue of boarders idled for the exit doors to the walkway to the plane to open…
Of course, it was designed to catch the eye…
Nevertheless, now meeting this unseen situation, that it would achieve online exposure and I would seat myself in an airport lounge thinking of nothing other than to view it and read the story as otherwise I might have in years gone a newspaper, I suddenly experienced fear of public exposure as a creative fool with lunatic ideas about freedom of expression and new and reworked forms in an entirely lunatic world. I felt TERRIFIED.
Flashback. University of Queensland in the Jo Bjelke-Petersen and Russ Hinze days. After that a series of miserable experiences of repression and terror and getting down protecting the artistic expression of others, their gallery display space, their right to having a crack at making a living as artists…the actual events did not flood back, but their emotions of authorities somehow in my face and it was a time of siege! Hoot! Laugh at self! I don’t think so! Salutary memories, I think! The thin line between being a stranger in a strange land regardless the hard work of the apprenticeship and instead a patron in a pub where there are mates looks like a terrifying thin string at times.
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Gosh! I wake up half dead from the heat and renovation racket in the address where I am staying, and can’t even get any chippies out of the establishment’s dispensing machine! Watch a movie! Nice theatre! Bit histrionic maybe! Let’s see how do I really feel. Nice lads in backpackers taken to saying hello to the intensely tired looking woman (of some! years) and the share sleeper/backpackers in my dorm sneaking in and out to leave me sleep, that’s cute, I feel good about humanity. And look! My piece is up. Time running out on pieLink advertising Movember! Unreal. pieLINLK!
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I mention here that where the foreign moniker ‘Porker’ appears that is an editorial error and should read ‘Corner’. “Simon Corner” is a character who surely can be understood as beneath Foodge’s contempt when the story’s said and told I believe, Foodge still being away from The Pigs Arms looking out in the attic last heard of to invetigate why Granny’s brew was like it was!!!??? Where is Foodge really!? Check the folders, new readers, for Foodge and thanks for coming past and reading The Pigs Arms wall post-its and essays and epics.
Merv! We have Melbourne visitors on their way for a look at the Ladies Room work and make some comparisons. A round of pink drinks for our guests if you will be so hospitable-as I’m travelling light-to put that on my slate!
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love the picture shoe.
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….love it too, is it yours sandshoe ? I see ‘shoe’ at a corner of the picture.
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Yes, I like the pic too…
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H, yes it’s mine and it’s nice for me too that Lehan loves it, and asty as well. Originally, done with fine pen and pencil, felt tip pens, colouring in pencils and wax crayon, but for its publication it has undergone some work in Photoshop.
Thank you. 🙂
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That shoulda been two “lls” for Othello of course. Hic!
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Great again, sands!
A quirkily told love story with pathos and punch, with banter and bravado and with a boozy bathos. (The way Black proffers a glass of the good stuff would make any woman squirm, I reckon). All taking place upon the dusty timbers of the Old Globe theatre. Juliet has a new look and Othelo is his old true threatening sleaze bag…
Or so I reckon!
The picture is also great!
Sis and her hubby were florists for a while, until she hit him over the head with a bunch of roses he forgot to put in the fridge at the end of the previous day. After that he kept making garlands for her hair with daisies and chrysanthemummies!
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I think you need a winky eye to denote crappin’ on after your coment about Black’s way with women, Atomou. Glad you like. Corner no doubt didn’t like Black treating him like a man on the beat I am sure. Note there’s an editorial error. I will check the versions when I get back to Adelaide from Melbourne and see if this one needs to be replaced when Mike has nothing to do. Don’t want to give our Readers the wrong ideas about how this yarn starts and where it’s going. I think perhaps my time is up on the ‘pie’ .
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Could not help thinking in the light of a new day that I needed to return to this comment by atomou …to tell you how I very much appreciate your feedback and appreciative comments. The ‘dusty timbers’ idea was an interesting one, I thought when I wrote it so I am pleased to see your reading of the image tosses back an idea of the room as I wanted it seen, commodious and where the ‘all the world’s’ principle can be acted on for a continuation of this yarn… has to be a continuation. We have to discover who this woman is with the Australian accent, we are up the creek who the woman who called instruction to Black was, we can’t tell why Black wanted to do Corner an impetuous injury…
The descriptive words you use that convey what I have intended… bathos, and pathos and punch among them … are the music I have needed to know whether I have moulded these sentences to some semblance of the genre I am seeking to get the better of … in my wildest dreams I never thought I would, it was a wistful dream to attempt the words and possible conversations, those charcters I am not, have never been myself, but an observer certainly. You ought to have a drink on my tick if you want atomou. I met emmjay and I think he might be prepared to try persuade Merv to allow me some slate.
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