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By Sandshoe
Readers who might have missed Episode 1 – November last year – may wish to catch it here Castle Episode 1
The Busker scrawked at the top of lungs sounding fit to burst. His head gyrated as if paranoia advanced to a physical affliction and his legs thrust rigidly forward in heavy worker’s boots one after the next as if he stilt walked the concrete drive, yet without grace. His thin shoulders hunched forward and his eyes slitted from side to (Suse always said about his eyes, psychopathic) side.
The incline to the squat known as The Castle is a driveway between neighbouring houses with neat white verandahs that now breathe only a sense of rectitude over the top of the silent, emptied bungalow of boarded-up doors and windows on the headland at the bottom of the hill. Suse lived at the Castle with her partner Black from a time before it was a neglected squalor of rotting and hard rubbish thrown from the verandah until on each of 3 of its sides on a ridge that sloped steeply away from one the rubbish mounted the height of the verandah’s edge. Her eyelids drooping shut mean for now we will be patient and sit quiet until Suse rouses again. She will take up description of her commitment to her profession and its conduct as if she had not slumbered. Suse, her white face thin and lightly freckled, framed with wispy hair, sits for now frozen in apparent sleep beside her coffee steaming on the surface of the adzed wooden table.
Black had come home from a nightclub jaunt in the early hours of that infamous Sunday morning, tossed fuel over the contents of the pit that all the hard rubbish from around the contours of the house had been thrown into and a lit match. The Australian woman, her head leaning back against the window overlooking the black of night on the gully, was sitting chatting with Mix’s Mum on the bed that was couch by day and for late night a traipse of visitors who left their impressions on its meagre arrangement of cushions. Her feet met with the floor of rough hewn squares of slate and their deep crevices between that had never been filled or sealed and she was running. Black, doubled over in a cloud of silk pillow case puffs of black smoke, staggered and bobbed, seemingly for a moment to mock and taunt her awe but it became evident with uncontrollable laughter like intermittent howls of grief across the silhouette of a breaking dawn. Where the surface of the pit had been a giant and surreal square of broken broom handles, tin cans and a washing machine protruding above the flat table top of recently bulldozered soil, the smoke billowed in an intersperse of flickering flames shooting skywards as Black staggered in erratic circles. Morning glory vine tendrils had become visible in the dawn light curling across the door of the raised garden shed out of which The Spider stepped in a crumpled frock of white guipure lace. His face creased with an expression of puzzled anxiety.
The Australian woman breathed deep. She addressed Black to try to determine if his gait was shock or if he was on fire and he straightened. As soon as he looked in her direction he doubled over. She wondered he was intoxicated, perhaps on nothing but laughter.
The yard filled with late night stragglers and confused early risers as dawn filled the previous anonymity of night with light, but Spider dominated at the top of the steps of the shed, the guipure sticking incongruously out beneath a knotted overlay of pink tulle. His legs threatened comprehension these were a man’s legs and not a human spidoid’s, so thin they might break, cloaked in stockings carefully sculpted into intricate patterns by dotting lit cigarette butts their entire length. The rumble of aftershock backdropping the backyard’s precipice to its valley floor like a theatrical curtain was broken by a lone siren, joined by another and another. An outburst of exclamation swelled and died as a crowd gathered. A young man from a property on the upper slope remarked as if to air on the depth of the valley of dense vegetation and its extent so close to the heart of a city.
The mouths of some neighbours hung open. The assortment of individuals in plain, striped and floral pyjamas with bath gowns and some hastily overthrown street coats grouped at a remove from where the woman from Australia was standing. These observers stood shoulder to shoulder and their shoulders hunched forward to project themselves to better see without entanglement. Black had looked up and seen them. He had doubled forward again with his arms crossed before his lower rib cage and his stomach as if wounded. The tableau of people was his catalyst. Sirens become louder ceased with inevitable surety. The firemen grouped as they ran past and stopped, other than one who reconnoitered the burning pit and Black. It was patent Black could not cease from laughter.
Suse stirs. The cold fire place behind her has metamorphosed in a quietude of contemplative sketching, into a row of stylised flames. “Then I knew,” she mumbles, “that Black Egg would never allow the dog to suffer.” Her companions are used to the long silences and mumbling broken by fitful sleep.

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I actually enjoyed your writing Sandshoe.
With some serious editing by Emmjay, you could have a best seller.
Now don’t take that the wrong way: take it as a compliment, because you have a little….je ne sais quoi.
regards
Julian
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Yeah, thanks, Jules. It was already edited by Emmjay ! 🙂 Am I blushing ?
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I probably meant, re-jigging 🙂
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How come it’s coming out in NSW summertime?
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That reminds me of……
Dgang dgang dgang C’mon everybody. Dah dah da da..Da da dad dah….???
Quick another apocryphal prize!
DE
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How about wait tilm I write the lot and we will have a look at it Julian from that view.
Thank you sincerly for your reference and feedback.
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I yam lerning how to spull. Sory eye mayke mysteaks. Sumtymes.
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That was just great Shoe. Thankyou for your eloquent arrangement!
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Lehan, thank you for your warm appreciation.
This sketch is the only one that survives of my first attempts at sketching straight. It was only one of 5 pencil drawings. I liked the time spent getting lost in the detail of the ladder and the simulation of a fireplace.
Regards oil paints… there was a box of second hand oil paints, and sponges and wot nots in a cardboard box for $10 in the local op shop. That was likely a good buy. I imagine a new tube is possibly somewheres between 8 and 12. I haven’t done any pricing yet. Started browsing in library books again though. 🙂
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Any excuse will do, so here it is again just because I think it’s fabulous.
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Brill clip, Waz. Gee one of the Small Faces dudes looks a lot like Hung, doesn’t he !
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Actually Steve Marriot (at the start), looks a little like Fergal Sharkey. I’d never given it any thought before. Well Fergal came along later and was a two hit wonder; his songs are played in every Australian K Mart!!..And most elevators
Rod Stewart joined them (different line up) later and they became The Faces, with many of the band, becoming prolific.
The one with the round black hat is Kenny Jones.I first met him when he was a client, and married to Janice, his first wife. They had a son named Dylan, the same age as my eldest .
Janice was quite a looker and the daughter of a promoter, whose name escapes me for the minute .
Anyway they split up. He got “The Who” gig, when Moon died. He left after row. He married another looker. The End.
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Great stories, VL, Something by way of a rock history piece for the PA ?
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Thank you Warrigal! You light up my life! What a wonderful group Small Faces. 🙂
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Fascinating Waz, the link to Black very obvious. One of them running to the dunnee. A secret poet perhaps, scroll in hand?
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I’m not going to lie and say that I listened to The Small Faces…
But I was so taken by Pavarotti and other two tenors on ABC that I refused to get out of the car and Gerard had to get the pinenuts and the single clove (Russian) garlic from Harris markets all by himself for the pesto we are going to make from our plentiful Basil…
Young Pavarotti belting out Retourno de Sorento…heavenly..!
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Young Pavarotti. H, lead me to a young Frank Sinatra and here I promise… love. 🙂
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Sometimes when I walk the little ones to school past all nice and neat houses, I’m stopped in my steps by this ugly red-brick unit building set-off the street by a weedy garden of overgrown Privet and Stinky Billy, full of rusty old Holdens. There are no verandahs, and no curtains , old raggy sun-damaged bed sheets hang, sort of, off the curtain rails….
The place reminds me of Shoes’ castle. I’m surprised that this place has not been cleaned up in this affluent manicured suburb.
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That, H, is, indeed a delight to me that you refer to wondering about the management of uncared for residences in suburbia. I am moved to recall a place in the south of Adelaide I saw not all that long ago on a long walk across hill and dale to visit a neighbour.
When you think of the numbers of residences and parks, naturally wild and tamed environments we see in such a walk it sure comes as an astonishment to find ourselves looking at a residence fallen into decrepit neglect or window sill high and further in discarded househood goods thus this place I saw (appearing the latter) was hard to fathom. It had the air about it of some sort of protest…yet there was no placard.
If it was in say, a city square, it might be an art installation at first sight.
Its frontage against its ordinary suburban brick wall on a corner and small rise – allowing an extra tumble of space – was a mess of (weathered) propped mattresses, a jumble of what appeared from my discrete distance on the other side of the road towels, bedding including sheets, doonas, bedspreads, and rusting rubbish of varying vintage, children’s toys (trikes, bikes) … beats me.
On the theme of suburban maintenance, I detest, H those programs on current affairs programmes showing a local council authority bull dozering a hoarding recidivist’s backyard at great expense, l-o-n-g after the event of their obsessive collection of all their rubbish without discard has become the problem of its seepage into neighbouring yards, a breeding ground for vermin and so on. And the issue of the mental health needs of the person thus repeatedly humiliated as if the only person in the world guilty of demonstrating no response to the social needs of living up close or contamination of an environment is offensive.
Yes, wouldn’t you think a community would respond to these matters in some dedicated and practical way either individuals or in concert with councils and/or public health and social services.
That, H, is a feature of my story. You will learn more about how the rubbish got thrown into the hole, how in the fact there came to be a hole in the backyard large enough to fit the accumulation … and eventually what the response of local authorities to the situation as they are very much significant characters in the story of ‘The Castle’. 😉
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Another wonderful episode of ‘The Castle’ Shoe! Congratulations! It’s beginning to remind me somewhat of the start of ‘Alice’s Restaurant’…
🙂
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Very good Shoe. A richly woven tapestry of colour and texture. I’ll make morning’s second cup of coffee and linger over your story again. A pleasure to read ‘ a cloud of silk pillow case’. Thank you for a lovely tale.
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I agree, Gez. I particularly like the “cloud of silk pillow case” image.
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Such rich descriptions. It’s like tasting a fine wine. Another sip, cast to the back of the palate, breath through your mouth as you swallow, there, what’s that flavour? Does it marry the aroma. Redolent indeed!
Thanks ‘shoe. Lovely piece. I’m sitting forward in my chair, almost willing Suse to wake up. Tell us a little more. Another piece in her puzzle. Plus, love the artwork, is it yours?
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You will hear more about Suse, Big M and soon I hope. Thank you all so kindly for your encouragwement and that I have provided pleasure to those of you who thus far offer comment is wonderful to know.
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encouragwement … teehee … the library bell was just tolled. 🙂
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